dude, find a new topic to animate
your animation are ok, but your using too much old style story lines. to me, the movie was good, but it felt really cheezy and cliche' also, one flaw, your movies are toooooo long for bunch of scenes with animations fading in and out. anyway, make a fully animated movie, and it would be impressive.
p.s. this reminded me of all the movies that people started to make about the 9/11 with sad songs and sad storys, just to let you know.